雅思作文的高端写法 你能猜到这结尾吗?

一个漂亮而又简约的结尾关于高分大作文来说无疑是必需的，虽然最终评分的主要根据并不是由结尾段决议的，但是结尾段的出色完成关于一篇胜利的学术类大作文是不可或缺的。在本章节中，海外考试研讨中心写作组的教师将率领大家领略结尾的不同高端写法。

　　一。 回忆全文+观念+瞻望：

　　这种结尾方式比拟合适于双边构造的作文，在这种写法中，我们要留意的是结尾段由三个要素组成，其中第2个要素是必需的 ，但是句子的数量能够是3句也能够是2句以至1个句子。首先我们来看一个例子：

　　I agree that we need to make sure that animals that are used for testing new products have the minimum of suffering. However, I am convinced that animal testing is necessary, and that it will continue to benefit humans in new and wonderful ways.

　　上面这个例句中，作者将本人的观念躲藏在了一个宾语从句之后，起到了一个欲扬先抑的效果。但是这种效果必需搭配一个瞻望将来才干起到渲染的效果。我们来比照另外一个例子：

　　In conclusion, physical punishment can be a useful method of discipline. However, it should be the last choice for parents. If we want to build a world with less violence we must begin at home, and we must teach our children to be responsible.

　　大家不难发现，2个句子都运用了类似的衔接方式，即首句坦率地回忆全文，将观念的对立面用/"退让/"的方式表达出来，同时也是关于主体段观念的回忆。然后再是用转机论述本人的见地和观念。最后再用一个关于将来的希冀来支撑本人的观念。海外考试研讨中心剖析以为，这种次第布置的优点在于关于文章的主体有很好的总结，但同时观念又是十分鲜明有力的，加上关于将来的润饰，使得表达更流利。用同样的办法，我们再来看第三个例句：

　　To sum up, although there are undoubtedly some problems with increased levels of education, I feel strongly that the country can only progress if all its people are educated to the maximum of their ability.

　　和前2个结尾不同，第三个结尾虽然也是先回忆了全文，但是它将作者的观念和对将来的希冀写在了一个条件状语从句里。如此就给出了我们在结构/"瞻望将来/"时的一个思绪，即搭配条件状语从句或者介宾短语跟在观念句之后。此种结尾开展方式同样适用于剖析处理型大作文的结尾段规划，比方：

　　All in all, although the problem of drugs may seem impossible to eliminate, there are concrete steps that can be taken to weaken the hold of drugs on society. The danger from drugs is too great to ignore.

　　关于毒品对社会的危害，作者先是供认现状的无法改动，进而悲观地论述了本人的观念即采取了实在有效的行动后能够削弱其危害。最后用毒品的危害性来对将来作瞻望。换句话说，在社会类剖析处理型谈论文中，我们在瞻望将来时能够思索用强调其久远的影响作为打破口。又如：

　　In short, there are several things that the government can do to allow more people to finish school. However, a number of society attitudes also have to change if the country/'s people are to achieve their full potential.

　　这个结尾的标题是讨论停学这一社会现象招致的问题和处理计划的。我们发现运用前面提到的条件状语从句也能够作为这类题材结尾的重要句型。

　　二。 观念+瞻望：

　　第2种结尾的思绪行将回忆全文局部省略，直接表达观念和企图。这种结尾方式比拟合适于纯单边支持的作文，以下我们来看几个例子：

　　It is obvious difficult to restrict the movement of people around the world and it is probably foolish to try to stop it. But attempts should be made to redress the imbalance.

　　关于人才流失的话题，作者在结尾一上来就表达了本人的立场，即无法阻止这个现象。但是进而又对改动这个情况做了等待。我们来比照另外一个例子：

　　All in all, the problem of world poverty cannot be solved by money alone. Nations need to work together on long-term projects, sharing their knowledge and skills so that each person has something valuable to offer their community.

　　在剖析处理型题材的结尾中也能够采用这种2要素的结尾方式，假如最后所剩时间不是很充沛的前提下，省略对全文的回忆而直接表达观念也是一种明智的决议。

　　To conclude, it is clear that although numbers of women in the workforce have increased, they are still disadvantaged because they generally put the welfare of others, particularly the family, above financial ambition or promotion.

　　上面例子中，我们发现，其实瞻望将来这个局部，也能够写成解释缘由，由于不是每个标题到最后都能想出一个适宜的将来让你瞻望的，那么这个时分我们无妨把思绪切换成对观念的缘由解释，也未尝不是一个好主见。我们再来看看这个例子：

　　To sum up, the richer nations have helped a lot by providing money for poor countries and poorer countries need to not only spend the money for daily use, but also put more money on economic developments, human resource improvements and education advancements, because only by doing so can they change their poor situations.