雅思作文主体段写作技巧

雅思作文主体段写作技巧。主体段落普通由主题句和扩展句构成。主题句普通放在第一句，是段落中心，用来概括全段内容。主题句分为笼统主题句和详细主题句。笼统主体句的作用是引出下文，点明方向，详细主题句则概略下面内容的中心主题。仅有主题观念是不够的，还要对其停止论证，也就是盘绕主题停止论证，对其停止阐明、叙说、举例及阐述。

　　一、举实例论证。

　　有些考生在开头提出观念之后，就不晓得该如何继续下去。这种状况下，考生能够举实例论证，举例是我们解释论证一个观念最好的方式，也是最有压服力的。

　　Although sticking to one’s goal is key to success, sometimes one should be ready to give up. Napoleon’s story is a case in point. After Napoleon succeeded in seizing the crown of France, he should have been satisfied with his achievement. But he did not. He went on to conquer the whole Europe. Then after he succeeded in ruling almost the whole Europe, he should have given up this ambition to expanding his empire. But he did not. He went on to invade Russia and there he suffered a total defeat. Later he was sent into exile and died in a lonely island.

　　本段援用了拿破仑的事迹来加以论证。拿破仑是众所周知的人物，而且最后决议拿破仑及其帝国命运的滑铁卢战役也是大家都知晓的。经过这个例子来阐明在恰当的时分学会放弃是很有压服力的。在举例时，最好选择一些大家都知晓的，这样才干更有压服力。当然考生也能够用本人的亲身阅历来加以论证。

　　The second reason for my propensity for outdoor activities is that they can build my mind greatly. In sports, one must learn to struggle for the victory, learn to fight with no matter what is left in his body. And one must learn to stick to one’s own confidence and hope, no matter how little the hope may be. And one must learn to accept failure, learn to start again after failure. Long-running and mountain climbing contribute much to this kind of spirits. I will never forget the feeling when I raced to the final line first in a 300-meter running. I could hardly breathe in the last 100 meters. My lungs ached and my legs weighed tons, but there was still one runner in front of me. I gave all my strength to move one foot ahead of the other. When I surpassed him, he gave a cry of surprise, I won at last and I learned much from the race.

　　文章在提出主题句后，先是加以阐述，然后用长跑和爬山作为例子。最后又用本人的亲身阅历和感受来论证室外活动能够加强一个人的毅力。

　　二、用一些研讨、调查、发现、科学家及权威人士的观念或组织机构的研讨结果加以论证，并援用数据作为支撑。此论证办法的益处就是比拟权威客观，更有压服力。

　　If people move to live in different places, they will have more opportunity for improving their lives. According to a survey conducted by the Chinese Academy of Social Sciences, 55% of urban Chinese had changed their living place at least once in their lifetime by 2000, an increase of 30 percent as compared with that of 2 decades ago. Chinese sociologists agree that this trend is most likely to continue with the development society. Statistics indicate that people who moved at least once in their lifetime enjoy a much higher living standard than those who never moved.

　　本段先是援用中科院的调查数据加以论证，然后用某些专家和数据继续加以论证。有一点值得留意，很多考生并不晓得真实的数据，考试中常常是本人的创造发明。所以没有把握的状况下，尽量不要去写那些众所周知的人或者机构，能够含糊地用某个机构或某个学者，数据上也千万不要太夸大，只需能到达有力够论证本人的观念即可。

　　三、经过比拟和比照方式来论证，这样两个事物、行为或者观念的利害就十分明显。

　　Those who believe in the measure say that students benefit a lot from traveling or working for a year before their formal university education. First, they can more broadly acquainted themselves with the society, deepen their understanding of the outside world, and thus better coordinate their objectives of learning with the needs of the society. In contrast, by immediate entrance to university they can not steer the direction of their study well and may display a poor combination of the theory with practice. Second, study at high school is really exhausting, especially when to win college admission. So it is necessary to grant these children a relatively long period of relaxation or buffer, say, traveling or working for a year, to loosen the chords of their brain, so that when they go back to school later again, they can become completely refreshed and rejuvenated.

　　这篇文章是关于上大学前能否应该用一年的时间来旅游或者工作停止论证。此段的主题是学生在进入大学学习之前花一年时间停止旅游或工作的话，会让他们收获颇丰。比照点是：进入大学之前一年停止旅游或工作有利于让学生普遍理解社会，加深他们对外界的了解，因而能让他们更好地谐和好学习目的和社会的需求。相比照之下，直接进入大学学习的话，他们不可以把握学习的方向，而且有可能会产生理论和理论相脱节。经过此番比照，旅游或工作一年关于行将步入大学的学生们的益处是显而易见，段落的主题句得到有力的论证。

　　四、经过假定停止正反阐述。

　　Then, since the transportation system is the lifeline of a country’s economic activities, its paralysis would lead to the disintegration of the economy, either industry of farming or daylife. Suppose all the means of transportation were halted for lack of oil, factories with insufficient raw materials would have to close, workers would be out of work, and ripe farm crops would have to stay in the fields at the mercy of rain and storms. People would try to store food and the price of all commodities would go up. If we take those power stations run by oil into account, situations would become even worse. In this sense, oil decides the fate of the whole economy and that of the government.

　　经过假定得出了一系列的可怕的结果，最后再得出结论，这样的结论是发人深省，当然也是最能惹起人们普遍注重的。

　　五、换种说法，换而言之。

　　The computer technology has no doubt at all replaced most of function, that is, we can read books from the academic database; newspapers and publishes from almost everywhere, this means that we do not need many hard copies and environment friendly for the earth. However I am not so much convinced that public libraries can replace other functions that we need other than providing information or books.